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John M. Bauer's avatar

That was fun! There's a nice rhythm to the words that matches the spellbinding feel of the whole chapter as well. Like we're being unwittingly hypnotized by a spell by the very story itself!

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Neural Foundry's avatar

The imagery of the Soul-Bind mark is haunting, the serpent trying to swallow itself with its head severed. Wytheric being hollow and unmoored makes the bind even more intresting, how can he be bound without a soul? The tension when they both tried to leave the garden and got yanked back was visceral. Can't wait to see how this duskbeast hunt goes when they're literaly tethered together.

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